Bivouac

Today I heard back from Bivouac in York with whom I got in touch a few days ago regarding summer internship opportunities. Unfortunately I didn't get the place on offer, but I did however push for some useful portfolio feedback;

...'Overall we were pleased with your portfolio, we particularly liked your 'speaking from experience' project! We just felt it would have benefited from showcasing a bit more variety and evidence of layouts featuring a large quantity of copy (e.g. magazine, etc.). Hope you find this helpful.'

In light of this I'm not too sure about the issue surrounding a diverse variety, but I am confident that examples of publication based design would benefit when showing my potential in a portfolio format.

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